I did not choose to make my rectangle diagonal in the end, after audience members finding it inconsistent with the look being presented.
I then changed the text colour to be blue to match my banners, because I felt that purple was too dark on the black, and I feel that this was a much better decision.
My FUSE. logo was then tilted to the side and put to the corner, so that it was not in the way of the rest of the contents page.
My audience members also mentioned the font under the Features, and how it looks too cramped and the thickness of the Impact font makes the writing barely visible. In a nutshell, it does not stand out the way that the Features list should. Therefore, I changed the font of the text to Futura, so that it still sticks with the theme, but also looks visible to the audience. Also, as an additional touch to making the text stand out, I changed some of the text to purple, which I feel was a good decision. Then, I spaced out the text, and made room to write underneath one of them, and use rectangles to make the list of features more decorative.
As well as this, in terms of my images, I chose to remove the image of the performer, to give the page more space, and I placed my other two images into rectangles, edited their hue and saturation, to give it a Polaroid picture look, which would be appealing to my audience, and would make the page look much tidier overall.
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