Audience Feedback - Contents Page

Once I had created my rough Contents Page, I showed it to a group of female adolescents, who fall into my target audience braket. I needed constructive criticism, and because these girls were not aware of the project taking place, I know that the feedback that is given will not be biased, and will directly represent the interests of my target audience.
They pointed out some aspects of my contents page that could be changed or altered so that it would be more suitable and look more like a music magazine.

Feedback given:

• The capital Impact font in the Features side of the contents page makes the contents page look too crowded and the text is barely visible.
• The Contents logo does not make the page look consistent and it doesn't seem as though it fits with the look being presented. Therefore, this will have to be reconsidered and reconstructed.
• The FUSE. logo in the corner looks too big, which draws attention away from the Contents title.

With this feedback, I shall reconstruct my Contents Page again, so that it looks consistent and shows the house-style that I am trying to present, and also looks appropriate for my audience.